| 2005-09-03 21:57:31 |
The truck stop slave
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woooooo that was some seruous shit i read motherfucking 3 sentances |
| 2006-02-25 00:43:08 |
The truck stop slave
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umm that is not possible i mean come on.. |
| 2006-05-14 12:02:35 |
The truck stop slave
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Good story.. But learn the Gorean Lifestyle before using it. The only Gorean thing in the story was the word Nadu. And that was used in the wrong position. It's insulting to those of us that do live it when it's done wrong like that. But, all in all, a decent story. |
| 2006-11-18 15:20:58 |
The truck stop slave
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very poorly written, and no fucking way is that true. |
| 2007-04-30 09:37:55 |
The truck stop slave
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The basic premise of the story was fine, but it was poorly presented. You need to understand basic physiology, because there is no way a man can cum 10 times in one hour. Also your capitalization, and punctuation were terrible. Before you post another story, have a proofreader or editor take a look at it. Please don't inflict another sucj story upon the unsuspecting readers of this site. |