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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-05-25 13:25:51 | Loving Her | This story is too short, and some of the content was spelled wrong or didn't make too much sence to the readers. Judging from the comments, the rating of 3.25 well suits this story so far. Try writing a bit better and learn from your mistakes next time. - Walter Mcmullen (xnxx founder) |
| 2005-05-25 13:25:51 | Loving Her | This story is too short, and some of the content was spelled wrong or didn't make too much sence to the readers. Judging from the comments, the rating of 3.25 well suits this story so far. Try writing a bit better and learn from your mistakes next time. - Walter Mcmullen (xnxx founder) |
| 2005-08-21 03:53:51 | Loving Her | it was ok but confusing.. i hate to sugest this but make a story line first than write it,,, spell check is your new best friend lean to use it |
| 2005-11-24 15:33:11 | Loving Her | A good first attempt but it leaves a lot for improvement. First always remember the spell checker, and try adding history to the story to make it easier to understand. Good luck. |
| 2005-12-24 16:34:54 | Loving Her | try a little harded hon and use spell check |