| 2004-05-28 08:37:35 |
Awesome Mother-in-law
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loved the story but the spelling was very distracting |
| 2004-05-30 00:27:13 |
Awesome Mother-in-law
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The content's great, but both the spelling and structure were highly detrimental to the impact of the story. 4.5/10 |
| 2004-06-01 01:06:40 |
Awesome Mother-in-law
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men this made me cum it's a sexy story |
| 2004-06-05 02:31:54 |
Awesome Mother-in-law
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Grammar, punctuation, spelling, punctuation, spelling and this shit ain't true. Anybody who has to tell their dick size is ususally lying. 2/10 |
| 2004-06-10 19:40:49 |
Awesome Mother-in-law
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i agree with Upeoplernutz, you have got to work on this story. do you have to go back to 6th grade to learn how to write? |