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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-02 22:32:56 | The Company Pic-nic | Structurally it was one of the best written stories I have seen, The dialogue was very. . . juvenile. Real people don't talk like that, I am curious, do you speak english as a first language, it almost sounded like a translation. Good story over all, Keep writing. |
| 2005-10-02 23:08:26 | The Company Pic-nic | Nice story! I wold have liked it if she gotten fucked much better by guy at picnic than any sex she had shared with her husband. Her initial attraction could had turned into budding feelings for the picnic lover that she starting to explore as they spent time talking together after the sex. It would have made a nice ending, as you had the husband showing up, forcing her to go with him, nipping any chance the two ignored spoouses had of establishign a deeper connection. p.s. Ziggy "but very good" isn't a complete sentence, even if you had capitalizing 'but'! What a moron! |
| 2005-10-18 16:05:09 | The Company Pic-nic | Sounds like a fun time. good story thank you |
| 2005-11-23 12:41:21 | The Company Pic-nic | I liked it. You did a great job please keep writing. |
| 2006-02-10 05:56:22 | The Company Pic-nic | I would have liked to have seen a follow up. did they ever do it again. what happened when they met at work |