| 2005-08-03 18:38:51 |
Hillary
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Pretty good. Could have used more description, but again, pretty good. 9/10 |
| 2005-09-02 10:35:05 |
Hillary
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holy crap that was a good one. 10/10 write more |
| 2005-09-23 00:02:07 |
Hillary
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great story! the whole way he kept looking for her and wasnt rough with her was awesome! write a part 2! |
| 2005-09-28 03:12:46 |
Hillary
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I liked it at first, but as the story goes i kindda became bored. Don't get me wrong its a nice story. 7/10. Maybe I'm more into hardcore things. ;) |
| 2005-12-19 21:18:18 |
Hillary
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great story sweet and touching reminded me of my college days write more |