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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-06-27 03:58:01 | Sorority Pledge | loved the eating pussy |
| 2004-07-07 19:21:27 | Sorority Pledge | prolly the worst i've ever read...not really much to it |
| 2004-12-14 07:30:28 | Sorority Pledge | I DID A SIMILAR THING SO I LIKED IT AND GOT OFF READING IT |
| 2005-01-10 11:45:42 | Sorority Pledge | you need to show us what happens, dont tell, show dont tell, and take out as amny adjectives as you can, and replace them with appropriate verbs, it makes it much more interesting for the reader, and a grammer lesson wouldn't go amiss |
| 2005-05-24 01:54:40 | Sorority Pledge | wow......and to think i thought this would be a good story |