| 2004-05-18 20:07:44 |
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ok, it has the promise of being really hot, but then ends it right away. wat the fuck! |
| 2004-06-02 13:17:49 |
A WEEKEND AT HOME
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I can only assume that what I read was part I of a double of tripple chapter story. Honestly it's beginnng to be too predictable and unless there is a coersion or hot seduction of one woman overcoming her defensive instinct and turning lez, oit's not that hot. |
| 2004-06-28 18:54:25 |
A WEEKEND AT HOME
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one long fucking runon sentence. Take an english course and learn how to write a hot story |
| 2004-07-06 11:42:53 |
A WEEKEND AT HOME
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some hot strap-on fucking with mom looking on would have made this story rock bring on pt.2 pdq |
| 2004-07-21 18:49:34 |
A WEEKEND AT HOME
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man that sucked ass, balls, and more ass. this is the worst peice of shit i have ever seen. a story about me doing my fat-ass mom and dad would have been better than this shit. |