| 2005-03-14 12:21:06 |
Sunshine and Moonlight
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Mostly meaningless with many, many mistakes. You are badly in need of real sex. Try the Downtowner Lounge on Main Street. |
| 2005-04-08 03:03:12 |
Sunshine and Moonlight
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I smite the one that says this is a bad story! they just have no appreciation for real art. The ending was a little abrupt, but cute, and though many like it feel cliched, this just fit. Im a fan of the myserious |
| 2005-04-23 21:41:04 |
Sunshine and Moonlight
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it was good i could feel the romance write more |
| 2005-04-29 15:02:39 |
Sunshine and Moonlight
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I Loved the story. Extremely romantic one. Cud actually picturize the whole event taking place in the field....the moon, the rising sun, the rain, the wet hair, all excellent descriptions !! 10/10 from me ! |
| 2005-07-10 09:06:35 |
Sunshine and Moonlight
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thats was awesome. very well detailed u get 10/10 |