| 2004-04-29 17:41:03 |
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Only one problem...Hermaphrodites' testicles reamin up in their abdomen. Otherwise a very imaginative story and well told. Will we meet Cassie and Jackie again? I hope so! |
| 2004-05-01 16:39:54 |
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ditto the long intro and too short on sex - more, much more fucking |
| 2004-07-24 22:08:32 |
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The introduction was good. The follow-up was lacking. There's a vast variety of activities that the girls could get up to. Well written and sufficiently cumworthy story. This is a fantasy so why not pop a man into the story while you're about it? That would increase the number of permutations substantially. How about increasing the dick length a bit ? There seem to be too few stories of this genre. Please write some more. |
| 2004-02-20 07:59:06 |
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HOT! Intro too long...sex too short. Two hot babes, one a hermaphrodite, would never stop after one little fuck. They'd be doing all manner of things to each other and suck-fucking each other like mad. Including lots of dildo action. |
| 2004-04-21 23:41:24 |
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not nearly enough sex. Add a man |