| 2004-06-17 10:48:44 |
Rick comes into his own!
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woooooooooooooooooooooooow. loving all the description its hard 2 get a writer 2 put as much description in it but wow thanks i had many orgasms... 6 i think...! |
| 2004-07-06 06:47:34 |
Rick comes into his own!
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Excellent. No other word to describe it. |
| 2004-07-09 07:06:32 |
Rick comes into his own!
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I haven't actually looked at commenets made here for some time so to all of you for your comments 'thanks' and to 'ALW' amd 'MC' especially who are looking at several of my efforts..... 'ALW' Thanks for your feedback; I try to write stories which can be read as descriptive prose in addition to having the effect of getting your (and mine) juices flowing! I am quite proud of my ability to turn so many women on ...even though its only through my writing! 'MC2023' you are becoming one of my regular readers and I appreciate your comments. You have already written to me off this site. Happy to hear from either of you any time! |
| 2004-10-04 11:50:28 |
Rick comes into his own!
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vell done! not the best i've read. but, far above what's mostly here. so well done and write more and grow with experience |
| 2005-03-19 15:09:47 |
Rick comes into his own!
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I didn't rate this cause I didn't read it. I would love to read it though so next time please indent a little more and use more paragraphs, thanks. |