| 2005-07-05 06:49:51 |
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Real of fake I don't care its incredable ! Is she still writing ? |
| 2005-07-13 23:45:19 |
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that was good but it toook me three days to read 10/10 |
| 2005-08-13 02:34:35 |
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good story one of the best ive read actually and ive read about 2000 stories lmao i have lots o time on my hands but it had a little bit of everything in it great story u should make a part 2 about the weekend with her parents jus dont make it as long5pages is plenty |
| 2005-08-26 21:53:42 |
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Good story, bring it on!!! you get a 10/10 |
| 2005-09-03 22:55:09 |
Party Time_(2)
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Cheesy and predictable, What happened in the first couple of paragraphs? You were loading groceries into the boot of your car and then a guy got a soda out of the refrigerator you were standing in front of? Get your shit together....... |