| 2004-09-18 16:03:08 |
Katie And Her New Friend.
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Yeah, the grammar and spelling were both really off. Story wasn't all that horrible but too much "talking" through out. Please correct grammer and spelling in part 2 and I'll be sure to check it out. Good luck. |
| 2007-06-09 19:00:59 |
Katie And Her New Friend.
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awful |
| 2004-08-02 22:04:30 |
Baton Rouge_(1)
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you could have at least dragged it out a little more |
| 2004-08-28 02:17:45 |
Baton Rouge_(1)
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Needs more content,describe the cock you sucked in greater detail, size, girth,etc.. How it felt to you, doing the deed excited you, you could describe how hot you were and everybody needs more description. |
| 2004-10-22 00:50:10 |
Baton Rouge_(1)
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way way way to short man plz use more descpriptions with what the dick was like ect i agree with the last comment but all and all i give it a 5 |