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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-03-25 21:50:05 | My horny Sis | really good story...i am 13 and my sis is 11 and we always do stuff like that... :-) |
| 2005-04-04 16:43:26 | My horny Sis | Wow; I had to take a moment to catch my breath |
| 2005-04-04 23:35:22 | My horny Sis | Ah, the classic cliffhanger...Just a few things though. I'm not here to criticize your content, just how you put it together. When a different person is talking, you need to start a new paragraph. You put your entire story in one massive chunk and that made it a little difficult to read. Splitting the parts of your story will remedy this problem and it's rather easy to do. A little grammer and this story will be excellent! See you on the battlefield! (^_^) |
| 2005-05-04 01:10:21 | My horny Sis | very good story, cant wait for more if you decide to finish. |
| 2005-05-27 22:07:15 | My horny Sis | You guys do realize its against the law for anyone under the age of like 18 or in some areas 21 to view this right? if your going to i suggest you dont post your names like dumbasses.... nice story though.... |