| 2004-12-18 23:32:30 |
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omg that was a great story one of the best |
| 2004-12-27 10:27:09 |
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great stuff man longer would be good but it was great 8/10 |
| 2005-01-14 23:35:01 |
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i wish i had some of that stuff it might make me grow to 13 iches good stuff man |
| 2005-02-15 15:49:49 |
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Interesting but not very well executed. Waaaay too short an arousment passage. The plot device drug was a complete waste of space & was a distraction to the story line. This needed at least three or four more passes through the "typewriter". |
| 2005-07-06 18:08:25 |
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Very nice story! 9/10 |