| 2004-06-16 11:26:36 |
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i kinda think its funny that these 2 came to this story, it wasnt bad...but it barely made me hard...i guess it was just lame too me...w/e i enjoyed reading it but ... it wasnt all that erotic to me...overall im thinking it deserves a 7.45 or so...nicely written...not many if any...mistakes in spelling and grammer and a nice story line...i still think its funny that they came reading it lol... |
| 2004-07-07 00:35:22 |
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it was decent made me horny, no cum, 3 |
| 2004-07-17 01:11:13 |
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my b/fmade me cumlike astorm |
| 2004-07-22 01:11:03 |
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yeah it was ok,,, a bit random at times but good... jumpy... a shit lot better than most of the frankly disgusting stuff that most stories contain!!! good efffort man... 9 outta 10 |
| 2004-11-25 16:45:19 |
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Good story, but just a litle bit unbelievable. Trapped on a subway? I'm lol, U get a 6 |