| 2004-06-13 23:12:26 |
Kitty and Kate
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decently written. still oh-so-unprofessional. |
| 2004-07-03 00:50:02 |
Counting Stars
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I lov that story, its romantic and filled with just enough sex for this virgin.... |
| 2004-07-28 00:16:13 |
Counting Stars
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Written by an Astronomy nerdy girl. Not cumworthy. Good style. You need to have a powerful orgasm after hours of hard rodgering. This may add some animal to your writing. Asking a hardened porn aficianado to read this is like the bar tender who starts giving water to his customers once he thinks they are too drunk to notice. |
| 2004-08-10 19:36:55 |
Counting Stars
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Don't know y they r complaining. I liked it. |
| 2004-09-14 08:38:00 |
Counting Stars
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This was beautiful. |