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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-06-25 00:01:19 | Maggie | yo thats pussy footin good man! that really rattled my camel toes! |
| 2004-07-08 16:44:10 | Maggie | for a fictional story pretty good but y would u want to throw in the part of haveing the baby and letting urself go should have spent more time on the sex portion |
| 2004-08-01 20:36:26 | Maggie | Might I suggest that you reread the story? It contains several annoying gramatical errors that I noticed without trying to correct it or anything. The story was kinda bare, the sex portion was different if not well described, something I find refreshing. But overall if you are going to describe something, do it properly and don't jump to the sexual part until you feel you have it all set up. This could have been a great story, but I find the level of descriptions on all planes to be lacking, personality? enviorment? My personal preference makes your story feel rushed, something that I think might add to that are the short sentences when you should have made them longer to have something in store for the more passionate moments. |
| 2004-08-02 05:40:42 | Maggie | I think this story is true, I wish you both a long happy life together. Dont agonize over your body shape, it will eventually be what it was always meant to be. However, do always work hard to be your mans best friend. Talk to people who have good marriages and try to achieve the same. Good luck! |
| 2004-08-04 07:52:45 | Maggie | wow gr8 i wanna doooooooooooooooooooooooooo the ting's with ur!!!!!1 |