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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-02-14 23:46:33 | my best friend_(1) | nice story 2 short though great potential needs more descriptions. But overall great job |
| 2005-02-15 15:04:34 | my best friend_(1) | good story needs to be longer |
| 2005-02-15 17:14:28 | my best friend_(1) | This Story Sucked. Bad Usage of Commas. |
| 2005-02-15 20:06:29 | my best friend_(1) | good story needs to be longer 10/10 |
| 2005-02-15 20:45:36 | my best friend_(1) | pretty good but too short. i liked your description of the activity, but you could have used more words. plus, commas are used to break the action, or describe, a part thereof. Keep writing. r |