| 2004-06-20 22:10:53 |
Late in the Evening
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Man, that is some sick shit! Your trash talk sucks. Who talking trash ever uses the word "extracted"? Nasty. Write what you know buddy, because this is something awful made worse because it's obvious that you haven't got a clue. Your dialog is less than believable and completely unimaginative. Your plot line (was there one?) was the most unintelligent I've ever encountered. Just because this is a free site, doesn't mean we should have to read this slop! I hope you don't write for money luv, if you do, I'm afraid you'll starve! |