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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-06-25 07:17:33 | The twins, Jullie and me | fucking ridiculous.dexter has a point.it reads like something that would messily spill out of your head while stroking off.next time cum then write the story .and for gods sake man elaborate.have you ever read a book .they build a story and elaborate to make it more enjoyable.not just jot down the details and fill it in with some connectors.LEARN BITCH!!! |
| 2004-06-27 01:48:35 | The twins, Jullie and me | no comment.... |
| 2004-06-29 23:08:41 | The twins, Jullie and me | BORING |
| 2004-07-03 22:33:16 | The twins, Jullie and me | you got to bring the person into the story slowly and build the story up. else the person feels like he is missing something. i think this is what Dexter and Coolhand are saying. |
| 2004-08-11 13:31:04 | The twins, Jullie and me | make it longer and with more descriptions and it will be v.good by the way when u write an incest story mark it as an incest ,,reader love this |