| 2004-06-07 01:13:34 |
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haha WOW!...lmao i like how you just get right into it...haha forget bout the stupid stories before the sex |
| 2004-06-09 21:13:52 |
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dood.... It only took me fuckin 17 seconds to cum to this.... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! :P |
| 2004-06-22 18:17:15 |
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I liked the story BUT try not overdoing using the same word over & over again. In this case 'slowly' was used far to many times. If that was me in your story yes I would slowly lick your pussy and also want you to slowly suck my cock BUT only at the start. As one gets excited you start to speed- up your actions. As a writer you should start writing about the things you know best, I just think you should do reseach on the topic you're writing about. In this case suck some cocks and get your pussy eaten, I bet you would not use 'slowly' so many times in your next story after doing some field work reseaching the topic for future stories. For a first story you did pick a good story-line. Even if the next story is not great, you will enjoy the reseach work. |
| 2004-06-24 04:17:58 |
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damit it gurl i remember that but u had to put it in a story......it was good |
| 2004-07-14 17:52:36 |
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This is amazing. It is very similar to Shygirl's work. I would love to have a session with both of you! Keep up the good work! |