| 2004-08-22 19:22:59 |
Frat boyz
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what the fucking hell was that. absolute BOLLOX! not good as an erotic story, not good as a normal story, poor quality writing, poor plot. just fucking give up mate |
| 2004-08-30 05:04:59 |
Frat boyz
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*crys* we barly knew him im im so sad hes gone....... oh srry i was just moring for your story when it died and the first fucking setance |
| 2004-09-02 22:24:40 |
Frat boyz
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that was god awful was waiting to get horney and sticky but thats not the case |
| 2004-09-24 09:05:56 |
Frat boyz
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after reading first sentance foresome reason felt hypnotized...to exit you stupid bitch wish i could give it a negative 5,000 score |
| 2004-11-17 06:20:14 |
Frat boyz
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what a bad fucking storie you should be ashamed |