| 2005-03-26 16:47:01 |
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it was bad..i think it needed to be more into detail and if ur gunna do ur sis make it so ur sis is liek a fuckin model or sumthin not a gurl who is just hittin puberty |
| 2005-03-31 03:00:48 |
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i wish i had a sis so could do her like that |
| 2005-04-01 11:00:13 |
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Read the damn description!! If ur just gonna whine about the story dont read it in the first place. Also the author is realistic. a 4th grader having a 12inch cock like thte other stories is a total pile of bullshit. |
| 2005-04-11 05:19:40 |
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Jack, don't fret over most of the comments. Your story was written well and the language was quite believable for the age-group. I thought the story very realistic and credible. Pre-teen kids do do these things. nature helps stimulate them. the result of the bed-visit was as it should have been.the participants are not horny teenagers or perverts as some of the readfers obviously are. keep up the writing. |
| 2005-04-17 13:52:00 |
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I agree with Bo. I don't think Monkey is fair. This story is about a young girl and it's very realistic. There are plenty of other stories on this website about older girls looking like models and being experienced with sex. If you like those, go ahead and read them. |