| 2008-01-16 05:57:30 |
Freaky Mother Daughter Fuck
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Terrible writing - just the pits. The story reads as if you're a teenager who's never had sex or an english lesson. |
| 2008-01-24 01:51:32 |
Freaky Mother Daughter Fuck
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got hard, then a boring story |
| 2005-03-12 00:06:52 |
The Magic Mirror
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its ok i guess, could be better and longer. make part 2, 3, 4 etcetc! You have a good talent. 8/10 |
| 2005-03-12 21:48:30 |
The Magic Mirror
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that was so friken hot i almost exploded |
| 2005-03-13 14:39:41 |
The Magic Mirror
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Good structure, good description. It flows beautifully. The beginning was a little wierd, but I hope you write more scrying stories. |