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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-06-09 01:26:07 | France | Quite good. I thought.....just dont get pregnant at 15 years old!Try the sex without having to be drunk...it's more enjoyable, I think, and you will remember it better. Keep writing. |
| 2004-06-10 07:21:13 | France | Yes, the story is good and pretty well handled, espcaially if you are 18, The drinking and the need to get drunk was the only offencive thing I found, I am in the midst of a Historical novel, that has an english lady in it , and found bits of your dialouge very helpful. A good edit job would make it easier to read and more exciting. |
| 2004-06-10 12:05:06 | France | I could've enjoyed this more knowing they were all over 18. But go ahead and continue... |
| 2004-06-10 12:37:06 | France | whats your novel about hrose? |
| 2004-06-14 01:23:55 | France | Awesome story...I just wish there could've been a fight between her and her bf =( |