| 2007-10-06 20:50:36 |
Phone Sex_(1)
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fggggggg |
| 2005-10-09 11:55:03 |
Photo Shoot - Part 1
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Wow, Very good. Paragraphing is a little off still but the general idea is there and wow, goin on to the next one.. |
| 2004-03-24 10:19:02 |
Photo Shoot - Part 2
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INTO IT TOO QUICKLY AND OUT TOO SOON |
| 2005-10-09 12:06:55 |
Photo Shoot - Part 2
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Very good, paragraphing could use a little more work, but great so far, on to the next again.. |
| 2004-11-24 03:25:12 |
Sailing_(2)
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great short story! good job. nothing wrong with this one. |