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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-07-19 15:54:43 | Princess Annabelle | JackSprat - I seek no catharsis. I seek only to share a story that others can read and enjoy. If in my writings I am able to help others as I have already done, then my life story is not in vain. I share this story not only for the pleasures of the sick minded individual - but for those who experienced similar fates in their lives. My goal in sharing is for those individuals to see that life may in fact deal us a shitty hand in the beginning, but we as adults have a choice what to do with those experiences, and how to react to them. I choose to help others in their experiences to get past all the pain and anger they experience and move on with their life. Thanks for the comment. |
| 2004-07-22 12:33:21 | Princess Annabelle | great |
| 2004-08-01 20:43:51 | Princess Annabelle | The theme of the story isn't what I usually read and I won't vote on that due to how biased my vote would be. I can vote on how well you wrote it though, I found only three errors when I quickly read through this (English is my second language, therefore I might have missed the majority). Only three errors is quite remarkable for this site where some people don't bother with capital letters at the start of the sentence. The language had a nice flow nad the way it was told laid up the facts while spikign interest, even though it felt like an emotionally devoid recounting. I will have to think about that style when I write something in the future, not all that common in the erotic litterature where most seem to want over emotional, totally illogical works of pure dribble. |
| 2004-08-02 07:05:56 | Princess Annabelle | what a pile of paedophilic shite! its in no way cutting edge, lines like "He felt guilty and ashamed as he explored the inner folds of her being careful not to slide a finger into her open pussy. " are jusp plain paedophilic! |
| 2004-10-02 20:53:38 | Princess Annabelle | not bad you write well |