| 2005-05-09 22:29:44 |
Amanda & Ben
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Overall a good story. Reading "arse' got a BIT annoying, but besides that...I give it to thumbs up! hehe |
| 2005-05-19 22:40:03 |
Amanda & Ben
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cool story should put more detail in what happened in the shower |
| 2005-05-20 20:06:59 |
Amanda & Ben
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First off, I like the word arse. It is very English, which has a very sexy accent. I'm Irish but live in American and am an American and I say arse also. Ass is vulgar and butt is childish. Leave the man alone, the story is great. Kisses to all |
| 2005-05-30 01:29:49 |
Amanda & Ben
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very nice, though i must say a deep throat could've made it a little more interesting. and for anyone who says "more detail," he did just fine. detail and intelligence in a story like this are hard to achieve with the same effect. thank God it wasnt "ghetto," though. over all, very good. |
| 2005-06-11 00:30:06 |
Amanda & Ben
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wow that had great detail... i love stories with detail like that... n there wasnt a bunch of shit in the beginning too... great |