| 2004-07-03 17:44:16 |
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Pretty good stuff. Who the fuck wants to fuck a bitch who has ten guys' cum in her ? And what fucking fag wants to lick up other guys' cum ? The story became a bit too gay for me at that point. There could also have been more anal action, double penetrations and so forth. The fucking part is great. It is quite hard to find professional women that are total fuck machines. That part really got me going. Otherwise the story is generally well written. I have no gripes with the form and only minor ones with the content. |
| 2004-07-04 09:55:36 |
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really nice story. liked it very much how about a sequel? |
| 2004-08-05 21:32:11 |
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i really enjoyed this stoyr i think you did a really good job on it but i think you should of made it way more detailed when it came to the fuck and suck, and a guy eating the womens pussy after she's been fucked was a good entry to as not many females now how that feels, thanks again for the story please keep them cumming ;oP |
| 2004-09-25 13:17:01 |
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you r all satanic whores, shame on u! |
| 2004-11-09 08:29:18 |
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Pretty good stuff, but more details |