| 2004-06-24 10:26:25 |
Summer Fun: Chapter Three
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ah, and here is chapter three, full of wet loving. tell me what u think. |
| 2004-06-24 12:40:29 |
Summer Fun: Chapter Three
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I know you've heard from me in almost every story, I usually write the longest comments. Excellent story dude. I'm glad you listened to us and went along with the whole incest crap. For as wrong as I think incest is, this story was a huge turn-on. Perfectly written, few, if any mistakes in grammar or spelling. I loved it. Hope you write a few more chapters, because this story ROCKS! |
| 2004-06-24 15:04:05 |
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that was fucking great |
| 2004-06-24 19:52:25 |
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Zepplin, my man, ur stories are ficking awesome! Almost no grammatical errors, paragraph breaks, and awesome material. You are, by far, the best author on this site. I'm definatly gonna be using the author search more often now. Keep on writing man! |
| 2004-06-24 22:12:06 |
Summer Fun: Chapter Three
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WOW I got so hard reading this story I just had to Jack off to finish it. I was still hard and jacked off again after reading it |