| 2004-09-21 12:30:28 |
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Don't bother with the other 13 parts unless you are going to have something longer, more believable and more erotic. |
| 2004-10-26 22:31:03 |
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i agree with all other comments, this is shit |
| 2004-11-07 13:54:24 |
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it was good but quiet impossible.it doesnt sem to be truth.so add some reality:) |
| 2004-11-07 18:12:01 |
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You should cut your dick off and suck it you mother fucker. Your fucking grammer sucks, even at the age of 11. I know little boys and girls at the age of 8 years old that can write better shit then this you little fuck face, fucking fuck your own fucked up grandpa, you fucker. Well I am sorry, just write better stories you fucking fucked up son of a fucking fucked up bitch. Fucker! |
| 2004-11-15 00:58:48 |
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That was the shittiest, and weakest fucking story I ever had the displeasure to read. Were you fucking high when you wrote this piece of shit? Are you fucking retarded? I damn near threw up it sucked so bad. Fuck! I dont know whether to try and get you help, or laugh. I think i'll laugh at this piece of fucking shit. |