| 2004-07-21 18:53:04 |
mysterious day
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Skateparkzone61 should be avoided. He posts the same story over and over under different names. The best part is that his story is so totally moronic that you it will leave you in a stunned trance of utter disgust. You will actually feel your IQ dropping by the second as you wade through the totally idiotic punctation, spelling and grammar. I've heard of TV making you dumber but his stories prove unilaterally that reading can actually make you dumber. His incompetence is a undefendable indictment of the educational system which spawned him. In Holland, the author would qualify for euthanasia. |
| 2004-07-21 19:06:39 |
mysterious day
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The word is punctuation. See ! I'm already getting dumber. |
| 2004-08-25 18:11:39 |
mysterious day
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try not ever writing a storie again. that was so bad i got shrinkage. |
| 2004-09-22 15:06:46 |
mysterious day
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this story is good dont listen to the other morons keep writin |
| 2005-07-01 09:45:19 |
mysterious day
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Just keep up the GOOD writeing Periods & punctuatio are GREAT to have but once a GOOD story is written who care's about the other stuff GOOD LUCK EL TAZ 6977 |