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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-07-08 06:48:41 | The Days of jefferson high-pt. 1, ch. 1: Amber | This is just a small taste of what's to come in future editions of the Jefferson high series. =) |
| 2004-07-12 23:51:52 | The Days of jefferson high-pt. 1, ch. 1: Amber | Grammer was great cept a misspelled word or 2, need more detail and dear god make it more interesting |
| 2004-07-15 01:02:56 | The Days of jefferson high-pt. 1, ch. 1: Amber | Lovesick: Thanks for the comment. I've always been aware of the fact that my grammer must be close to perfect. About the detail, it was a dream and at the time I didn't feel the need to have detail. The next story I assure you will have more detail and will be more interesting. BTW why would you say it was uninteresting? |
| 2004-07-15 17:45:12 | The Days of jefferson high-pt. 1, ch. 1: Amber | This addressed to 'Lovesick' and to 'MikeyC' You're right about a couple of spelling mistakes but the story shows imagination and drive. I think its a creditable first effort and I'm very curious to see how the story developes. As a Brit, I've never understood the US educational system; perhaps I'll find out something about it here! Keep 'em coming (in several senses of the words, Mike!) Oh btw 'lovesick' if you want to make comments about syntax and grammar, you really must learn to spell correctly yourself. Write out 'grammar' ten times and see me after class! |
| 2004-07-26 01:13:25 | The Days of jefferson high-pt. 1, ch. 1: Amber | well jefe i read the other one first but this is just as good waiting for part three |