| 2004-07-19 20:06:28 |
Sarah's Adventure
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not one mention of what a big fucking cock this guy had and no cum-shots on these sluts.Good writers make their readers visualise.Not abad story though but not kinky enough |
| 2004-07-19 22:59:22 |
Sarah's Adventure
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I thought it was extremely visual! Good story.. don't listen to that ass. We don't need to hear about a 9 inch cock every damn story we read. In fact, thank you for not mentioning the cocksize. That actually made it better for me. |
| 2004-07-20 06:36:10 |
Sarah's Adventure
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fuck all of you and you're comments its a fucking nice story |
| 2004-10-13 23:45:42 |
Sarah's Adventure
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waza |
| 2004-10-29 00:46:08 |
Sarah's Adventure
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Excellent story! Really appreciated 1)paragraph breaks so it didn't run together, 2)no mention of his big cock 3)not kinky, and 4) it didn't end with the typical cheesy "we now get together every friday night" or whatever stupid ending that tries to extend a perfect moment in a ridiculously generic way. |