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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-10-11 21:48:57 | okay. | |
| 2004-12-04 02:36:34 | theres a thing called quotations and stuff like that..... and smaller paragraphs dont clump it all up like that | |
| 2004-03-08 16:37:02 | CARD GAME | Where's part 2 |
| 2004-04-07 05:02:47 | CARD GAME | Too many god damned exclamation marks. It takes away from the story. |
| 2004-04-13 10:13:09 | CARD GAME | It could have been a good story, but i don't think the author proof read it...... |