| 2004-07-16 23:19:19 |
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The spelling errors are infantile. The story isn't believable. Who is Amber and where does she come from ? Why does she immediately want to or even know how to suck sock ? Who starts ass-fucking the girl just after popping her cherry ? This incompetent crap is the product of a diseased mind. The total lack of prepost editing indicates a total disregard and contempt for the reader. It deserves a very low rating indeed. It had one good point though. It was short so I didn't waste much time reading this worthless garbage. |
| 2004-07-17 04:23:03 |
First time_(9)
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Peofile sick pervert go fuck yourself, u supposed to get ppl horny with these stories? SHe hasent even got her period yet you dumbass.... 7 year-olds dont even have a mature cunt yet you shit.... you put ur dick in there they bleed n you go for jail u ass hole bitch hehehehehe |
| 2004-07-17 10:16:39 |
First time_(9)
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Having fantasies about fucking little girls? Do the world a favor and get yourself castrated you fucking PERVERT. |
| 2004-07-17 14:25:57 |
First time_(9)
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you are a sik bastard if you have dreams like this you should be hangd!!!): |
| 2004-07-18 00:35:41 |
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It could've been way better..take more time with spelling, etc. Try to make it easy to understand. Also, raise the age a little bit, even I think 7 is too young! :-P |