| 2004-08-07 12:28:32 |
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Very Good |
| 2004-08-13 12:40:17 |
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I THINK IT WAS PRETTY GOOD |
| 2004-08-18 01:39:53 |
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Learn to spell you misspelled so many words it made the story suck.. Sounded like you were masterbating to your own story when you were writing it and that's like laughing at your own jokes. Learn to write |
| 2004-10-04 14:25:26 |
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I realy hope this gets better!!!! |
| 2004-11-28 01:01:03 |
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Seems like the author cut the story short to finish himself off. The spelling errors were probably from the spooge all over his keyboard. |