| 2004-07-21 18:05:15 |
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This is really good writing. It is better than I can manage but very much along the same lines. The description of every thought, every sensation is extraordinary. Congratulations! |
| 2004-08-26 07:50:57 |
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Well written and erotic; I commend you for creating imagery without resulting to cliche or filth. |
| 2004-11-22 05:48:38 |
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alright get this...Rick, i had an orgasm without even touching myself. i felt like i was really there. the way you told it. i felt like it was all happening to me. i was hypnotized. when the girl hits her last orgasm...i found that i was biting my bottom lip and rocking in my chair. i dont know how you did that, but you got some serious power *winks* |
| 2005-02-25 15:17:46 |
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Amazing. Great. I will always rate stories like this with a ten. it was perfection. |
| 2005-06-25 03:05:41 |
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Beautifully written, thank you. |