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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-09-19 20:21:51 | MY DEGENERATE FAMILY | Way over the top! Ceases to be erotic before the end of the second paragraph because the sex is incredibly hyperbolic. And, Shaggybob, work on your spelling, syntax, punctuation and grammar. You do know what those words mean, don't you? I think you must be a product of some of the action you describe so woefully. |
| 2004-09-20 02:39:58 | MY DEGENERATE FAMILY | Well Old Fucker, sorry you didn't like it. I use spell check so there should not be any misspelled words. As for the syntax I agree with you. Some times I get a little lazy and don’t restructure certain sentences, but what the hell these stories are for all us perverts anyway. (grin) |
| 2004-09-20 22:30:56 | MY DEGENERATE FAMILY | Wooooooooooooooooooooooooow... |
| 2004-09-21 02:23:42 | MY DEGENERATE FAMILY | right on shaggy.. i get all the comments bout spelling n shit... but im not entering a contest for spelling .. heh.. i just write people say it good i post.. but the lame asses wanna diss on it.. good job!! i got to the cousin part and cant read my more ... clit hurts to much:-P |
| 2004-09-21 02:59:58 | MY DEGENERATE FAMILY | thats what would wish for any day you and your family are so freakin lucky |