| 2007-04-26 08:47:02 |
My beloved one
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what a touching romance...do you want to kill me...my name is michael doyle and i love corpses...guluk ya kant |
| 2007-09-12 09:14:50 |
My beloved one
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That was the acme of sickly perversion dude. I dint know anything could be that mortifying till i read this and i felt nauseous. Epitome of cruelty. |
| 2007-09-15 02:43:47 |
My beloved one
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Uhm? for all you critics of penis size, this is poetic license, not to be taken literally. it amuses me to read such militant comments about size, perhaps stemming from inferiority complexes. This is a dark, morose and troubling story, but it is excellently written. keep in mind that it is "just a story." so, chill out and accept it for what it is. |
| 2007-12-20 13:10:14 |
My beloved one
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I don't particularly enjoy necrophilia, so although I don't really care if someone else gets a kick off it, I would wonder why its in the monster category instead of the necrophilia category- there wasn't any monsters in this story- just a half dead woman! |
| 2004-07-24 18:58:25 |
Lonely Sister-in-law
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No flaws in the writing, I give it a 8/10. |