| 2006-11-15 12:53:43 |
Mom & me, one summer night
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it was ok u just skipped to many spots. Its like I got horny then it stopped got horny again then I said fuck it. |
| 2006-12-01 22:34:18 |
Mom & me, one summer night
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A lot of mistakes, a little short, needed a lot more sex and details but otherwise ok 4 out of 10 |
| 2006-12-15 20:59:35 |
Mom & me, one summer night
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stick to jacking off, your writing eats shit. u gotta b a young teen virgin cause you got no idea abouy sex, you fucking moron, wait about 6 years until you been fucked then try writing about it, but you still probably be too stupid to make sense |
| 2007-02-21 22:43:59 |
Mom & me, one summer night
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i've seen a rock write better stories than this shit! |
| 2007-03-20 07:50:44 |
Mom & me, one summer night
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u know what u should first learn stuff about sex and how to write and u know i dont know how they even let stories like this on the net dont they have a quality control |