| 2004-12-03 11:10:18 |
TWENTY THREE DOLLARS AND MY SISTER
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I agree honey.....i think the storyline sucked majorly but the spelling and grammar was unusually good compared to some of the other fuckheads on this site....good sex detail tho...overall id say its an 8/10 |
| 2005-03-02 06:45:31 |
TWENTY THREE DOLLARS AND MY SISTER
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Excellent story. More fleshing out between the brother and sister's relationship would be nice. |
| 2005-04-28 04:06:26 |
TWENTY THREE DOLLARS AND MY SISTER
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excellent story bravo bravo it get a 8/10 |
| 2005-07-10 04:04:28 |
TWENTY THREE DOLLARS AND MY SISTER
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Heh.Good sex.I agree story line sucks. If only Tom got some, why did the other guys have to agree? They should have fit in there somehow. |
| 2004-05-24 23:45:47 |
A Good Friend_(2)
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You wrote a very good story. Thanks. |