| 2005-05-25 11:23:37 |
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Stephen Collura WTF we're talking about fucking sisters and you add that shit about being gay and liking deserts. Go find a desert to wander around in, I'll spend my time with these great sisters. This was an excellent story. |
| 2005-06-01 18:12:14 |
Sister Switch
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that story was okay.... good idea.. but without paragraphs made it damn hard to read... at times it was difficult... wich one was jessica and wich one was kate... not bad though |
| 2005-06-05 09:44:34 |
Sister Switch
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u all souck im 12 go fuck your self |
| 2005-06-14 03:15:16 |
Sister Switch
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that was a splendid story ah hell with nice talk that story rocked screw the negative comments...please by all means continue to write i rate this work of art 10/10 |
| 2005-06-16 10:21:09 |
Sister Switch
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Great Story. You need paragraphs badly. It makes the story very difficult to follow. It would help use understand who is doing what easyier. The twist at the end kinda lost the stories appeal, I don't know any sisters that would trade a man and both be OK with it. As I said great story. 9/10 |