| 2007-06-03 10:07:51 |
In the heat of The blaze
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What crap. Learn to write and learn to spell, you dumb arse hole. |
| 2004-09-28 00:48:19 |
When a Spanking just isn't Enough.
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story is rather intriguing no doubt butt leaves some to be desolate.. too long too many flashbacks of cybil.. no details of the anal play she allowed ,,should have included a few things such as #1. info on the anal play she allowed. #2. should have included the option to let her spank you, with belt ,or shoe etc ,, 3#. spend less time on details of pussy licking .#4.should have shortend the stroy into poss 2 paragraphs . this one is much much to long , |
| 2005-03-22 11:10:32 |
When a Spanking just isn't Enough.
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this was a great story, you should write a 2nd one about how bad you spanked cybil for being such a fucking slut. |
| 2005-05-20 20:13:48 |
When a Spanking just isn't Enough.
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Do you write General. Probably not. Anyway GREAT story. I loved it. Loved getting spanked myself a time or two also. It is a wonderful thing but i agree with Assman, you need a part two. Tell us about spanking cybil. She needs it a lot and I think after a moment or two she will like it ALOT. Kisses |
| 2006-02-06 19:47:52 |
When a Spanking just isn't Enough.
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Brilliant... absolutely brilliant... |