| 2004-10-03 22:34:31 |
Sex with sister_(2)
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You are one sick bastard, to want to rape your sister, write about something else; like a seduction, not a rape you asshole |
| 2004-10-05 02:20:32 |
Sex with sister_(2)
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U FUCKING IDIOTS DO NOT READ INCEST STORIES IF U DO NOT LIKE THEM! SO KEEP UR RETARDED COMMENTS TO URSELF AND MAKE SURE TO READ THE CATEGORIES U DUMB MOTHER FUCKERS |
| 2004-10-05 15:02:24 |
Sex with sister_(2)
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that story was pretty fucked up,your not supposed to rape your sister you fucking dick head! WSC 40 |
| 2004-10-10 19:57:32 |
Sex with sister_(2)
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Very well done, i love your style fo writing. There are two things that need to be worked on are: 1. Use a little more detail, make the reader feel like they are watching, or doing whatever is in the story. 2. Use more dirty words..Penis isn't really a turn-on for many people..most people like to hear "cock" and "cunt" and such. But otherwise, impressive. |
| 2004-10-14 07:33:27 |
Sex with sister_(2)
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u r one sick mother fucker u shud b put in a room an beatin. rapin ure sister fuckin dichheaded prick |