| 2004-08-07 09:29:17 |
Me and my brothers best friend
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Wot tha fuck i cant wank to that al thou i would luv to suck so dick! |
| 2004-08-09 16:28:20 |
Me and my brothers best friend
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that was...bad, learn some sentance structure, im not joking, its hard to beat off when theres no pauses |
| 2004-08-12 02:25:58 |
Me and my brothers best friend
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you should make small sentences. use coma. also, give more details |
| 2004-10-10 19:52:39 |
Me and my brothers best friend
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I must admit...I am baffled....Shouldn't you wait to start beating off till you're DONE writing it, rather than WHILE you're writing it? |
| 2004-12-07 17:01:20 |
Me and my brothers best friend
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As a story, it was OK but you need to learn the use of the English language. Longer sentences, with subject, action, and object., as m said, smaller sentences with comma breaks as you explore each area of the activity. |