| 2004-02-15 00:01:54 |
DANGEROUS LOVE
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that is not a real rape story. yes technicaly it was rape. she said no, he did not stop. BUT.... if you wanted it to be more of a rape story she needed to fight more scream. he needed to threaten her, get a little violent or SOMETHING. that would have made it more exciting. |
| 2004-02-20 14:40:34 |
DANGEROUS LOVE
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the ending kinda catches the reader off guard and ruins the moment where u add up the whole story for a lasting affect but the story over all wasn't that bad |
| 2004-03-19 01:14:08 |
DANGEROUS LOVE
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what the hell...so did the girl get off or not? and whats up with the pushing the guy off the edge..was she not enjoying herself after the initial shock of losing her virginity? |
| 2004-03-23 15:42:38 |
DANGEROUS LOVE
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yeah, i agree the ending kinda sucked. and personally i like when the girl struggles until the end. |
| 2004-03-23 16:53:36 |
DANGEROUS LOVE
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Sure i'll go to a sucluded spot in the woods. Sure i'll let you lick my clit. Sure I'll let you get me drunk then not tell my parents where I'll be. What the hell, didn't she say at the beggining that she was careful? Trust me, if a guy has a naked girl miles away from his house in a place that noone goes to he doesn't want to just talk. And what's up with the "I might as well enjoy it" line. Hey just because you can't stop the bastard, doesn't mean you have to enjoy it. |