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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-11-04 21:26:31 | My Sexy Little Girl | Paragraphs are your friend. Originality is also important. This story is immediately forgettable because there's no story to get involved in and the charachters are cardboard cut-outs, completely one-dimensional. In a nut shull, it sucked. Keep practicing. |
| 2004-11-06 06:22:23 | My Sexy Little Girl | that was so good i would fucked her all the way |
| 2004-11-26 23:20:33 | My Sexy Little Girl | I thought this was hot. Yes you need paragraphs and you need to set the scene more, describe and lead up to it more, but good try. Got me hot. |
| 2004-12-04 01:07:26 | My Sexy Little Girl | Short and poorly spaced. Why tease people like this? |
| 2004-12-06 23:28:26 | My Sexy Little Girl | u r a sick twisted little mad |