| 2008-04-21 18:06:25 |
First time_(10)
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i hope you have a husband or a boyfriend. because it helps to hav sum1 dat luvs u near u so u wouldnt remember dat. |
| 2005-07-09 19:30:29 |
Sister in law_(1)
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Liked the story. Maybe when he is looking in the mirror either one looks up and smiles. |
| 2004-11-19 19:02:38 |
Late Night Visitor
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good one very good short but good i really liked it the only thing i need now is a sequal very nice work |
| 2005-10-11 10:41:55 |
Late Night Visitor
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I will never go into a hotel lobby without looking for the lady in the red dress. Good story with just the right amount of "tease". Wish I could meet and talk with you. |
| 2006-10-01 12:49:30 |
Late Night Visitor
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good job but next time you should set it up more and use some more details |