| 2004-10-29 15:49:35 |
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good but needs to be longer |
| 2004-11-18 10:56:39 |
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I liked it a lot. You could make it a little longer and put in more detail. Good job! |
| 2004-12-03 09:13:30 |
ARE THE WOODS SAFE?
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Not bad. Could be longer. |
| 2004-12-11 17:12:45 |
ARE THE WOODS SAFE?
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Loved the setting. Thought the situation was well done. I would have liked to seen more desciptive sex, especially at the conclusion |
| 2005-06-12 16:14:51 |
ARE THE WOODS SAFE?
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Well written, but shorter than expected. |